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E Khattaba

This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Zgłoszenie konkursowe o numerze #44 do konkursu o nazwie E-Khattaba Logo
Zgłoszenie #44

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  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 2 lat temu

    show time

    • 2 lat temu
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 3 lat temu

    NICE!

    • 3 lat temu
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 3 lat temu

    very excellent logo

    • 3 lat temu
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 lat temu

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80 .

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 4 lat temu
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 lat temu

    Sure, right away.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 4 lat temu
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 lat temu

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 4 lat temu
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Organizator Konkursu
      • 4 lat temu

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I love the color scheme.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I'm very happy.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 4 lat temu
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Organizator Konkursu
      • 4 lat temu

      Entries #47 #36

      • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    I love it.

    • 4 lat temu
  • saraalmudhaf
    Organizator Konkursu
    • 4 lat temu

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 4 lat temu

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