I need an expert academic writer in this field (Biology-related), who can help me improve my final dissertation (6000words) with the specific topic related to "the analysis of the local field potential of rat barrel cortex and the establishment of state space model". I will provide you my dissertation and feedbacks. what I need you to do is:
1: Improve the dissertation according to the feedbacks.
2: Enhance the dissertation with a perfect-English language skills, making the analysis and the whole essay super coherent. (a proofreader with no related academic backgrounds is not competent in completing this job)
3: Provide a deeper analysis and discussion on what I have done.
[You must make changes in red colors so that I can see what will you have done in the essay].
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