Consult on ad copy and email newsletter copy

Discuss via skype (or feedback via email): ideas fo ad campaign and improve ad copy. See attached updated simplified ad. Any thoughts? Which do you prefer? FYI, the hand graphic is a draft and has a slight watermark, just IGNORE that for the time being. Help with email newsletter. NEWSLETTER We've let folks signup for our newsletter for years and about 7 years ago we actualy sent it out regularly for a few months. But there weren't easy to use affordable "email publishing" services like there are today. So...we're now reading to start sending out a newsletter regulary. * Once a month * Occasionally (every few months) special offers Our first newsletter will go out to about 40K folks, many of whom may have forgotten who we are (they all requested a trial or catalog and provided their email). We'll offer info on the sweepstakes you and discussed (giving away free ipad/tablet/ subscription). And asking that they confirm their newsletter subscription if they want to continue getting this free newsletter (and include some upcoming article titles). I WILL WRITE UP A DRAFT OF THAT NEWSLETTER ARTICLE or we can DISCUSS it. (I find it helpful to bounce ideas off of you. You ask GREAT questions.