Revised Version of Original
Removed extra text and changed order and fonts. if that font is too strong, let me know and we can find something softer...I wanted something that draws the eyes to the titles. Thanks again!
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Organizator Konkursu - 9 lat temu
We're getting closer but I'm finding it too busy now. A little more simple. Can I suggest we remove the thought bubble as well as the images inside it? Also...for the contact piece (www.cloudwifi.ca and the phone number...can I suggest we put that in the road at the bottom similar to how we've done this brochure? https://www.dropbox.com/s/vijk4um8gs5uz4g/Cloudwifi%20-%20Internet%20Solutions%20for%20Condos.pdf?dl=0 Third, I don't love the new title font (The Idea...Our Focus)...Perhaps there's a better option. Fourth, sticking to the less is more theme, I'd prefer just one set of buildings rather than one on both the bottom and the top. Once these things have removed, I assume you'll need to play with the font sizes and format as a result. Thanks for your work so far I like the direction!
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prisampath
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Did you get a chance to look at the modified version? Thanks!
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Organizator Konkursu - 9 lat temu
Hi Prisam - thanks for taking the time to resubmit. We
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prisampath
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Hey I simplified it quite a bit and resubmitted. Thanks :)
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prisampath
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Hey I simplified it quite a bit and resubmitted. Thanks :)
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