Explainer Video Script

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I have the attached script for an explainer video which needs to be improvised. The script is about our school bus service and is prepared from a parent's perspective. Please review the script and share your creative ideas as to how you can improvise the script and make it sound more interesting and engaging for the audience. Keep in mind the following points: 1. This is the first of its kind service in the region 2. The audience need to completely understand our technology and service features. 3. Our school buses have multiple safety features and each feature needs to be explained in brief. 4. You may explain each feature in brief or explain the process from the start to the end.

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@ancabaciu28

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$25 USD w 2 dni

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@eAcademics

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$25 USD w 1 dzień

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@rovadi

I think the order of the information should be changed for making the parent a better transmitter of the technical specifications of this service. I would change for the parent to make a brief introduction of Global Transport & Tourism before introducing himself, so at the time he does, he can talk a little bit about his common worries and just after that I would then talk specifics about the transport service. I am very efficient and I am always in communication for a better work flow. Would love to be of help. Greetings!

$25 USD w 2 dni

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@miraj354

I will write a visual script with potential interview slots in place based on the information provided.

$222 USD w 3 dni

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@peterhubbard80

I have so far identified the following issues with the script: 1. Small grammatical errors - examples "wherein advanced students safety" - should be "student safety "every time your children enter or exits" - should be "every time your child enters or exits" 2. Repeated/Unclear information - example SMS Alerts - this section does not correctly describe when the user receives alerts. 3. Fearmongering and flowery prose - example "chills down my spine" - this section should be rewritten so that the seriousness of the situation is not understated or overstated. 4. Unclear links - various examples Why am I telling the listener I am introducing them to the product? Just introduce it! Why is the Sleeping Child Check Alarm revolutionary or automatic? Why would I worry about my child's safety all day? Is my child on the bus all day? I will first perform a thorough grammar check of the entire text, before rewriting the sections identified above. I will perform this with US/English speaking clients in mind. You are welcome to contact me if you have any queries. Completion of this project will take 2 days from receipt of the offer.

$40 USD w 3 dni